Swapping personal statements Forum

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[badfish]

hey guys,

i don't have the time swap anymore, plus i sent out my apps today so please stop pming me

thanks.

badfish

[astav28]

looking to swap

[tecumseh]

me too anyone?

[consummategamer]

I have a DS in need of help. I'm willing to trade.

[noordint]

look to exchange PS. anyone interested?

[angeleyez09]

looking to swap as well. pm me.

[matty]

Anybody willing to take a quick look at my PS. I'll swap if you need help.

[thriftydig]

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[thriftydig]

bump. I know this isn't the best time for a lot of people, but I definitely could still use the advice. Thank you!

[caic517]

I could probably give some pointers to people if you guys don't mind PMing me your essay. I'm pretty much settled with my PS so I'll save you the trouble of returning the favor.

[pwolf]

If anyone wants to swicth, my e-mail address is amac13@gmail.com.

[MannekenPis]

I definitely need some feedback on mine. I scrapped the one I had and started from scratch tonight. I am still looking to submit ASAP, so much help is appreciated.

PM me or email me please. Especially if you are a grammar nazi.

I will return the favor.

[consummategamer]

I am in the final (come what may) stages of writing my essays, and I am hoping someone can help me polish them up. I will be happy to edit yours in return of course. If you know how commas work, please PM me.

[tvaddicted]

If anyone is interested in swapping personal statements, pm me...i need some feedback.

[kgm05]

I would love to exchange. I've already had our law school advisor here and a writing center lady look over it but I still feel like mine is too mediocre. Let me know if you wouldn't mind reading over mine. kgm05@fsu.edu

[guypal]

Anyone interested in swapping feel free to PM me your statement.

[kimenaim]

I'm ready for my very first swap! My PS has not been edited by anyone but myself at this point, so I could use a lot of help. However, any advice you could offer would be helpful.

pm me your statement if you're interested.

[elsiej]

if anyone wants to swap PM me

[Severa]

delete...

[tvaddicted]

I have a diversity statement I need looked over, if anyone is interested in swapping.

[OldManStan]

Looking for competent copyeditor to destroy my flawed Personal Statement, withstand the barrage of poorly chosen words, mispellings, and improper punctuation, and help me sift through the garbage to produce a work of art. Jump into my sewer and swim in the refuse! Act Now, limited time only while supplies last.

PM me for good time.

[consummategamer]

I have a couple optional essays I would like to put some eyes on. I will trade, but I would like to get them done quickly. This should be the last of them, thank god.

[Lizface killah]

Looking to exchange constructive criticism. My ps is a touch unorthodox, but hopefully not boring.

[stickchick]

Okay I know that this is bad, but I started and started over so many times that I had to just get SOMETHING down and get some kind of an opinion on whether or not I should even continue writing this. It is obviously VERY raw and completely a roughhhhh draft, but I'm in a press for time and I need help! My feelings won't be hurt - I'd rather have your honest opinions, so I'm just going to post what little I have on here in hopes of getting some helpful criticism, even if it is that I just need to start over! Thank you!

I remember when my sister told me that her best friend’s parents were getting a divorce. I felt terrible for her and was so grateful that my parents would be together forever. A few short years later I sat down at the kitchen table while my mother told me she had an affair and my parents would soon be getting a divorce.
When I saw how bad my mother hurt my father – I vowed to never put my own happiness in the balance because of someone else. Maybe I have always been driven, but this was the day that solidified, in my mind, that the success (or failure) of my own personal endeavors will be the only thing that defines my happiness.