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First draft PS feedback

Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2017 6:24 pm
by anderssonyang
Hi,

I have the first draft of my PS and I'd love to have some feedback, especially on if the topic works. Any opinion is appreciated. PM or comment if you are willing to give it a look:)

I'd like to swap, but I have been busy recently so it could take some time before I reply, and I'm not a native English speaker so things might be a little different, but I will try my best.