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Would Greatly Appreciate A Critique Of My First Draft

Post by Anonymous User » Sun Sep 24, 2017 8:05 pm

It definitely has a lot of problems - a bit meandering, cliches and platitudes, dead weight, etc.
Someone whom I trust has read and critiqued this and I agree with much of the criticism but I'd like to see a second opinion to see if the two critiques match up (or, to illuminate issues the other reviewer missed).
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Re: Would Greatly Appreciate A Critique Of My First Draft

Post by hermanberk » Mon Sep 25, 2017 5:22 pm

I'd be willing to read it -- feel free to message me.
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Re: Would Greatly Appreciate A Critique Of My First Draft

Post by Anonymous User » Mon Sep 25, 2017 9:49 pm

Thanks very much. I PM'd you
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