Would Greatly Appreciate A Critique Of My First Draft
Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2017 8:05 pm
It definitely has a lot of problems - a bit meandering, cliches and platitudes, dead weight, etc.
Someone whom I trust has read and critiqued this and I agree with much of the criticism but I'd like to see a second opinion to see if the two critiques match up (or, to illuminate issues the other reviewer missed).
Someone whom I trust has read and critiqued this and I agree with much of the criticism but I'd like to see a second opinion to see if the two critiques match up (or, to illuminate issues the other reviewer missed).