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hi1everyone

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Looking for someone to edit for overall tone/topic

Post by hi1everyone » Mon Jun 19, 2017 5:48 pm

Hi everyone. I just finished my first draft of my personal statement and I'm worried I may come across as whiny... broadly, it's about challenges I overcame at work.

Let me know if you're interested in offering honest and constructive feedback. I'm open to swap as well :D
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zkyggi

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Re: Looking for someone to edit for overall tone/topic

Post by zkyggi » Tue Jun 20, 2017 12:11 am

Send it
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Re: Looking for someone to edit for overall tone/topic

Post by hi1everyone » Tue Jun 20, 2017 12:05 pm

I've decided to post it for a little bit but I am weirdly paranoid (unfounded?) about having something so personal up! But since you all give really helpful advice on other forums, I'm going for it. Thanks in advance.


Removed. Thank you for all feedback!
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Re: Looking for someone to edit for overall tone/topic

Post by Hennessy » Tue Jun 20, 2017 10:35 pm

If you decide to remove it, DM me tomorrow and I will review it.
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