Hi everyone. I just finished my first draft of my personal statement and I'm worried I may come across as whiny... broadly, it's about challenges I overcame at work.
Let me know if you're interested in offering honest and constructive feedback. I'm open to swap as well
Looking for someone to edit for overall tone/topic Forum
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Re: Looking for someone to edit for overall tone/topic
Send it
Last edited by zkyggi on Sat Jan 27, 2018 8:16 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Looking for someone to edit for overall tone/topic
I've decided to post it for a little bit but I am weirdly paranoid (unfounded?) about having something so personal up! But since you all give really helpful advice on other forums, I'm going for it. Thanks in advance.
Removed. Thank you for all feedback!
Removed. Thank you for all feedback!
Last edited by hi1everyone on Wed Jun 21, 2017 11:22 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Looking for someone to edit for overall tone/topic
If you decide to remove it, DM me tomorrow and I will review it.
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